915
Eighty-five words short of the original.
I had to get rid of some dialogue which I might be able to put somewhere else, but I’m happy.
Hero has a last name and an actual occupation. It’s looking a little more together. I just have to get past this scene and then I can introduce the real MC, that being the heroine. She’s my first gun-slinger. Atleast, I think she’s a gun-slinger. This is one of those times when I’m just writting whatever comes to mind and be damned the planning. I expect I’ll have to do a lot of re-writing but I just have to get these scenes down. Even if I just do these first two and then begin the ton of reasearch I know I’m going to have to look up.
Oh, um…anyone drink out there?
If so, what’s the names of the drinks you’ve had or wanted to try? Any you’ve just found interesting?
Paralyzers (with Vodka) are like Heaven in liquid form. Shirley Temples with Vodka are also nummy. Vodka Slime (Vodka, 7-up and lime juice) sensing a theme here?
Long Island Iced Teas. Hot chocolate with Bailey’s. China White is the best shooter on this planet hands down. You, I see you, don’t even think about trying to come up with something better. You can’t!
Great, now I look like a freaking alcoholic or something to strangers everywhere.
“Great, now I look like a freaking alcoholic or something to strangers everywhere.”
Heh heh. All in the name of helping me with research.
*takes note*